Re: Session 0: Character Creation
Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2016 2:48 am
Oh, I have Scholar. No reason for me to take Cartographer.
Play by Post RGPs and a nifty dice roller
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I feel like we're rapidly out-posting and further confusing Coil... So, now that we know his basic Cleric concept, I'm going to try to help by breaking out a step-by-step for him.coil23 wrote: Perhaps I underestimated the uniqueness of Burning Wheel systems. I got the pdf for the rules and started looking through...it seems I will definitely need help with character creation.So I am voting in favor of group creation.
You are a Human Cleric.Tymian is a cleric of some experience and has risen a fair ways in the church as his devotion and discipline have become evident. He is too veteran to be naive any longer and so understands there is grey in the world. But while he is respected, he is not overly popular due to a reputation for being a stickler for details and rules (called Tymian the Tight behind his back). The church finds the need for this shadow squad distasteful but, alas, necessary due to the dire situation. [dire situation to be defined later, I assume] Tymian has been assigned to accompany the group to be the eyes and ears of the church and, ostensibly, to enforce the true morals and dictates of the church. In reality, Tymian has been given the uncomfortable burden of having to be a witness to the dealing with this situation in any way necessary while still balancing the public moral face of the church. Tymian is valued and respected enough within the church to be given this important but unenviable task. He is to be the church's official representative and scapegoat.
NAME: - Disciple Tymian (the Tight)
CONDITIONS
Fresh: +1D to all tests until new Condition
CLASS/STOCK: - Human Cleric
LEVEL: 1
Benefits: Your level 1 title is Disciple. Your level benefit is the ability to wear any armor and use a shield, mace, flail, warhammer and sling. You can also invoke the Fury of the Lords of Life and Death.
ALIGNMENT: - Law
ORDER OF MIGHT: 3
RAIMENT: -
BELIEF: -
GOAL: -
INSTINCT: -
RELATIONSTRAITS & WISESEXPERIENCE POINTSABILITIESSKILLSEQUIPMENT & INVENTORYMAGIC & MIRACLES
The "one test free" but is a factor for Counts as Recovery confuses me.Create Elixirs and Salves Factors
Remove Condition (via aqua vitae or vapor): afraid,
angry, exhausted
Duration (one test free): counts as recovery
That is excellent! We should try to distill down a piece of it for actionable purposes - one sentence that you can act on or struggle with.The church is slipping into complacence and self-serving hollow gestures. Eegolan Borgia is merely the most smug and shameless about it but he is gaining more and more company along that path. Petharian feels an almost desperate need to make up for this moral lack by proving himself through the right deeds and right intentions to try and balance the scales and preserve (or regain?) the church he loves in his heart. While his heart is still true, his methods become a little harsher over time as he feels the slope becoming steeper and more lonely as time goes on.
Theologian doesn't have the automatic utility that some of the other skills have, true. A lot of it comes down to dungeon design: a good dungeon will have things to test multiple skills. But Theologian can add a lot of flavor, and more importantly, act as a guide to the GM as to what's important to the players and the characters.coil23 wrote:The focus on healing made sense to me but it was also partially trying to be practical. The studying religious tome when encamped makes sense for Peitharian also for how he is/what his focus is. Will theologian as a skill come up much (or at all)? I can go with either as an instinct. If both seem like they will be useful then perhaps the tome instinct might be truer to character (though less the dutiful cleric team player).
I'd agree that needs to be more concrete. That sounds like a Belief, but if I were GMing I'd be confused as to what it means and how to challenge it. You see yourself as the moral compass (or that's how I read it), and that's great fodder for a Belief. But the community's morals aren't likely to come into play much. The rest of the party's will, though; and you have a half-vampire who's been sheltered from the world, a young girl struggling to understand her powers and her role in the world, and a holy knight that's been brought back from death to wreak holy vengeance. What about something simpler--more along the lines of "I will do what is good and right"? That gives the GM some clear ways to challenge it--all he has to do is give you a situation where you can make a choice between what is easy/effective and what is right. Do you save the villagers, even though it means you'll have to give them some of your provisions you may need, or may slow you down when horrible monsters are pursuing you, or do you press on and leave them to their fate?coil23 wrote:If I had to distill my paragraph down to one actionable sentence it could be: Peitharian strives to do what is right for the greater good, whether or not this conflicts with the morality of his community. (need to be more concrete?)
I like how the relationships between our characters is evolving.coil23 wrote:He truly did not want this assignment at the beginning and still often makes a show of how exasperating, thankless, and fruitless it is. Secretly (not always covering as well as he might think he is) he has begrudgingly grown fond of the girl. What he will not admit to even himself is that her reliance on him and her (if this part holds true) devotion for him means more than he can say because in many ways it is the closest thing he has to having a friend. He is fiercely devoted to her though spares her very little of his natural sternness because he wants to teach her what is right. He will not give up on his church but he is realistic enough to know that is an unlikely success. But teaching this impressionable girl how to be a good person while still having clear eyes to see the world as it truly is as well as the wits to survive in it- that is a more attainable goal and one he deems worthy of his energies. A truly good person is what makes a church.
I like it.coil23 wrote:I agree that the little witch being assigned to Peitharian makes the most sense. *heavy sigh*![]()
He truly did not want this assignment at the beginning and still often makes a show of how exasperating, thankless, and fruitless it is. Secretly (not always covering as well as he might think he is) he has begrudgingly grown fond of the girl. What he will not admit to even himself is that her reliance on him and her (if this part holds true) devotion for him means more than he can say because in many ways it is the closest thing he has to having a friend. He is fiercely devoted to her though spares her very little of his natural sternness because he wants to teach her what is right. He will not give up on his church but he is realistic enough to know that is an unlikely success. But teaching this impressionable girl how to be a good person while still having clear eyes to see the world as it truly is as well as the wits to survive in it- that is a more attainable goal and one he deems worthy of his energies. A truly good person is what makes a church.