Alright, here is my sheet so far: Elias Malachi Cohen, a Toreador mortician by day and punk-rock-clubber by night (or at least, by day and night during his human life... now they're both by night). I think I've done everything right - hopefully everything looks good.
https://www.myth-weavers.com/sheet.html#id=2157217
I do have a quick question, though; if Elias's native language is not English (he grew up between a Yiddish-speaking household with his grandparents and later went to an English-speaking one with his parents), do I need to take a merit for speaking that language, or is it just part of his background?
For accounting's sake, I spent the freebies on a point of Willpower, a Background (Herd, 1pt), the merits Protégé (1pt), Elysium Regular (1pt), Early Riser (1pt), the flaws Prey Exclusion and Tic/Twitch (1pt each), a point of Appearance (5pts), and a dot of Presence (7pts).